Demo review hub
Every demo in one place for the sit-down review. All previews are private, noindexed, on unguessable URLs. Full research, fingerprints and on-site ammo live in pipeline.md; fingerprint log in DEMO-PLAYBOOK.md.
Pitchable — five demos, five industries
Kapiti Nursery & Landscapers Pitchable
knl-preview-f340.pages.dev
Heritage editorial · their own FB photos & story · dark photo-scrim hero · the pattern-setter.
Kick-offShow the broken site on your phone, then the demo — "this seemed wrong for a place this good, so I fixed it first."
Kapiti Denture Clinic Pitchable
kdc-preview-4304.pages.dev
Crisp clinical · Archivo, mint/teal · price-list page · senior-friendly type · blended stock imagery (labelled). Their listed domain is DNS-dead; competitor owns "denture clinic Kāpiti" in search. Same building as the old Waikanae Law office (Mahara Place).
Kick-off"This is what your patients get when they google you — a parked page. And this is a website I've already built for you — live right now."
ECR Coatings Pitchable
ecr-preview-5e1b.pages.dev
Workshop-industrial · their tagline as hero · chip wall of what-they-paint · before/after frames awaiting their photos. Category corrected: spray-painting specialists, not car repair.
Kick-off"When a kitchen designer googles 'spray painting Kāpiti', your old site is dead and competitors come up. Your tagline's already the headline."
Choice Pies Pitchable
cpies-preview-dc94.pages.dev
Warm bakery · Fraunces on butter-cream · tilted "Today's Board" card · real menu categories + burger names from their dead BigCommerce site.
Kick-off"Your domain doesn't even resolve. Here's what pie-hunters should find — the Today's Board updates from your phone in minutes."
Thai Marina Pitchable
tmar-preview-4e1b.pages.dev
First dark build · Newsreader on jade-black · THEIR photos and words (owner named, green-curry description verbatim) · chili-heat dots. Their site is live but HTTP-only — unreachable on most phones.
Kick-offType their address with https:// on their own phone, watch it fail, then open the demo. "Your photos, your menu — on a site that works on every phone."
Caution / archived
Chris Thomsen Motors Fit caution
ctm-preview-ae57.pages.dev
Their recovered logo & colours · Car of the Week resurrected · stock grid. Caution: stock pages fight the low-touch model — needs a heavier care plan or brochure-only pitch. Proof of range regardless.
Waikanae Law Archived
Firm absorbed into Cameron Lawyers — preview taken down, code kept in repo as portfolio proof of the sober-legal system. Source of the mandatory still-trading check.
Review checklist (per demo, ~3 min each)
- Phone first: open on your phone — first screen, then scroll the whole homepage looking for overflow or cramped sections.
- Tap the phone number — every demo should offer to dial.
- Read the placeholders — do the [bracketed notes] read as honest and professional, never as unfinished?
- Squint test: put any two demos side by side — could they be from the same template? (They shouldn't.)
- Say the kick-off line out loud — does it sound like you?
- Note anything that jars — one line per demo is plenty; I'll take the list and fix in a batch.